Flies Flies Flies* Comments

Brilliant poem. I love it.

very nice. thanks for sharing. a few flies in the soup rarely hurt anyone 'cept the flies. thanks for sharing. love the rhymes! ! ! bri :)

Very topical at the moment. A great poem about my least favourite subject, blooming flies, flies, flies xxx

Very Nice....Good Narrative & Story.....

Very nice poem. I like the way you narrated the poem. hehe. It's exciting coincidence, cuz today I covered the door of my room with a curtain in order to stop flies from coming in. I didn't shot the door cuz it gets so warm and don't like fan. Well, Lemme tell you a story. Aday a person went to God and asked: Why did you creat flies? They are useless and bothering me all the time! God replied: You are coming and complaining this today! But flies come to me and complain everyday and say why I created humans. They are useless and bothering the flies! hehehe. Anyway I liked your poem. I hope You'dcomment on my poems too. Thanks

I truly enjoyed reading this poem. It is well written and has a nice flow. The humor was an added bonus. Thank you for sharing.

Very good, and much fun. A great humorist and poet you certainly are. Thanks for the smiles.

a funsome write to make a smile.a nice piece

I had to smile with this one. smacking flies. yuck I don't like them either