Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, June 20, 2012

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Let us dream of universal world
Let all countries be taken into confidence and told
The need to come to under one umbrella cover
With full assurance of their existence however
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2015

A very bold and timely call to all those concerned with the rot created by a section of people in the world. Great poem with perfect rhyming and a message: Let us stop killing at least innocents He may be son, daughter, wife or parent Time may come when we will no place to take shelter anywhere

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Posted By: Blacpoet - on June 22,2012 I agree. Ecology dictates where we live and the range is closing fast. Excellent choice of topic for a poem - A bit choppy but I followed it well enough. - Lots of Love, Stella [ Request review ]

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Comments This poem has been viewed 3 times Posted By: Blacpoet - on June 22,2012 I agree. Ecology dictates where we live and the range is closing fast. Excellent choice of topic for a poem - A bit choppy but I followed it well enough. - Lots of Love, Stella [ Request review ]

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Golden Sparrow nice 7 minutes ago · Like

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Manju Suri ?Hasmukh Mehta A truth revealing composition...of every country and nation...Things are turning from bad to worse...we still seem to be under the curse...but not for me because I believe...from every curse and sin I am free to receive...people are still under a bondage...ignorant as yet of the rock of ages...! ! !

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Let us dream of universal world Let all countries be taken into confidence and told

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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