Thursday, November 1, 2007

Flesh And Blood Drops Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who pays...
For the displays of injustices,
Dispatched and laid?
As rights and defenses,
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Alison Cassidy 01 November 2007

This is an exceptional poem which pens rage with great power and asks questions meant to shock a complacent readership. Your final line is brutal in its impact and the whole piece is superbly written. love, Allie xxxx

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Scarlett Treat 01 November 2007

This made me remember 9/11. As I watched in horror, I thought offices were exploding, because paper was drifting down...and then I realized that it was people...'plummeting to the ground to spread...flesh and blood drops...' And I could not say that I was absent that day either.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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