Fleeting Thoughts Comments

Definite, Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++

So well expressed! .. i too could have this problem though at night, when I'm just about ready to drift off...

Kim I can relate to it. It has happened to me many times. I am glad you have put the feeling into words.

Congrats! . This poem has moved up to #69 on the best member poem list.

It is a pity that you have not permitted us to give you a score. But, this poem deserves top score.

This happens to me very often. Mostly early in the morning, the most fruitful hours, a few lines take shape in the mind before I slip into sleep and I lose the poem forever.

Congratulations, Mr Kim Barney. Today this poem is listed in the Best Poems of Members featured on PoemHunter. I am sure you deserve recognition, more so for this lovely poem.

Today this poem has moved up to # 72 on the top member poem list. Congratulations!

Congratulations, Kim! This poem is # 87 on the 'top member poem' list today! Very nice rhyming.

Wow, I understand this completely! I do the very same, often, rather frustrating this growing older! ! !

I know the feeling! !

thanks for Poet's Notes, young man