Fleeting Thoughts Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Fleeting Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


Thoughts drip into my mind
Like candle wax melting
If only they would last
As long as flame that burns

Saturday, June 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 09 June 2019

Then they must be sweet good thoughts, to hope that they last.

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Amir Marandi 08 June 2019

Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Hurt 08 June 2019

Such wonderfully formed poetry.

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Matthew Holloway 08 June 2019

Burning bright through the night The candle

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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