Tuesday, July 9, 2019

Fleeting, The Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feelings felt if on funeral cores,
At the time of coitus— well of course,
For long were to prevail
Like wind on sail, on tail,
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Savita Tyagi 09 July 2019

Freedom is not far for this bondage horse... Marvelous limerick. A great depth of thought expressed in this compact style with well chosen words.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 July 2019

Thank you Savitaji funeral resolutions do not last long, and soon man is back to the same old square he started..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 July 2019

A limerick laudably articulates loss of interest in life soon after one returns from funeral site...a pragmatic little work sir!

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 July 2019

Thanks indeed for your keen observations

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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