Sunday, October 5, 2008

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Wanted to touch the fluffy white clouds
But realised it is unattainable.
Wanted to fly, but was bounded.
Mollycoddled in fantasies and fairy-tailed world
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Green Peace
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Bob Blackwell 12 October 2008

You have a rare talent for your age, an insight for our failings and the creativity to spell it out. An excellent poem. Keep writing. Bob

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