Friday, May 8, 2020

Fleeting Episodes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything slips away,
However hard we may try to cling to any of them.
Nothing is stationary;
Neither the people nor their shadows,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 August 2022

An excellent poem. Yes, life moves like one-way train. Insightful

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 October 2020

Life's journey! ! ! Moving on! Muse of mankind on earth; Nothing is stationary. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2020

@EKL, I am glad to have you visit my page. Inspired by your cryptic comment, to which I've got used to, by now. Thank you.

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Rebecca Navarre 01 October 2020

Wow, What a deeply moving poem! .. Breath taking! ..5 Stars! .. May you keep writing wIth such beautiful soul! .. i just occasionally breeze through. Take care, and best wishes to you! ..

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Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2020

@Rebecca Navarre, 'i just occasionally breeze through' - I would like to see you visit PH and nay, my page of poetry more often, dear poet Rebecca. I am so much delighted to have you appreciate my poem and rate my poem so generously! Many many thanks, deeply touched by your kind words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2020

Shadows of life! ! Shapes and shades; Born naked! ! ! And, we can't take anything away! When we die. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2020

Dear EKL, 'And, we can't take anything away! When we die.' - Thank you for sharing this profound thought. Your comment adds to the wisdom of which the poem speaks.

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Valsa George 09 May 2020

Our eyes can barely hold all that we see, They soon turn into a forgettable memory..........! The comparison of life to a train journey is so apt! We keep moving forward and so many scenes flash past us. We cannot catch all the scenes well enough to retain in our memory! At the end, we reach a terminus from where there is no return train! Well presented and really enjoyed!

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Khairul Ahsan 13 November 2020

'At the end, we reach a terminus from where there is no return train! ' - This line sums up the poem so well! I am highly inspired by your thoughtful comment and the generous appreciation, @Valsa George.

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