I feel like I'm drenched in the Arctic sand,
While listening to the music of downfall bands.
My heart does not recognize your great existence,
Because you are fixated on someone else's residence.
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I find your poem unique and powerful, it has size and rhyming. keep up the great works
I can feel the emotion on these lines 'Can I see you smile? Can I hear your voice? '
'Going from town to town with your body and your guitar.' this is burrrrnnnnn ahahhaha like it
I remember Bruno Mars for this line 'Moving on is now both a distant dream and a grenade.' haha well, it's a good poem
'Moving on is now both a distant dream and a grenade.' this line touched me, i like this
'Prevention is the remedy; cure is unknown.' perfectly made