Thursday, August 31, 2023

Fleeing Love Affairs Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel like I'm drenched in the Arctic sand,
While listening to the music of downfall bands.
My heart does not recognize your great existence,
Because you are fixated on someone else's residence.
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Enchanting Owl
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M H 02 September 2023

'Prevention is the remedy; cure is unknown.' perfectly made

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CJ DG 02 September 2023

I find your poem unique and powerful, it has size and rhyming. keep up the great works

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Acir Eryat 02 September 2023

I can feel the emotion on these lines 'Can I see you smile? Can I hear your voice? '

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Julrick Verallo 02 September 2023

'Going from town to town with your body and your guitar.' this is burrrrnnnnn ahahhaha like it

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S December 01 September 2023

I remember Bruno Mars for this line 'Moving on is now both a distant dream and a grenade.' haha well, it's a good poem

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S S 01 September 2023

'Moving on is now both a distant dream and a grenade.' this line touched me, i like this

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