Thursday, March 10, 2016

Flee My Mind Comments

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If I could flee my mind, where would I go?
Roam across an area devoid of thought?
Run through fields of abstract nouns?
Meander through lanes complete with verbs?
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Rajnish Manga 27 July 2016

The poem has a freshness in its expression. The poet wants to be in a state of thoughtlessness and nothingness apparently to attain a state of peace of mind. Thanks. Roam across an area devoid of thought? Or try and acknowledge the nothingness?

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