Fledgling Awakening Comments

I do not envy the very young. Your title is especially evocative. The imagery of fragile wings attempting to soar on their own...10, for you. Love, SandraX

That first sweet kiss will always be, in my heart for eternity i wonder if she remembers me in the place we used to be! should i remind her now as an old friend? or keep our secret till the end one day! who knows! you have an amazing mind Fay Slimm! regards Bob

interesting theme, fine thoughts..10+

haha this made me laugh.. I loved the ending.. nice.