Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Flaws-N-All Comments

Rating: 3.6

I wasn't your type but you loved me anyway.
You had issues of your own but when I looked at you it was like Christmas day.
Arguments N the daytime, love making at night was our forte.
When you weren't around I thought about you every minute of every day.
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Darkangel Flyfree 02 October 2012

Great poem...Everybody has some kind of flaw!

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Crystal Tutson 24 July 2012

Great poem..i can mentally view the story..good job

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Shai Cherry 23 July 2012

I'm lost for words but it was a good poem

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Captain Cur 20 July 2012

Good poem. We are all flawed and I believe love helps perfect us!

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