Monday, November 23, 2009

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Tick tock the clock, don't talk, don't stop
Pace quickens into overdrive
Shake off the shock, No care, no thought
The rhythmic pounding clears the mind
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Robert Mahoney
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JoAnn Mahoney 23 November 2009

Hi Robert. I thought your poem was great. I like how you put it all together. JoAnn

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Robert Mahoney

Bellevue, Wa
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