Friday, October 13, 2017

Flashlight's Flame Comments

Rating: 4.9

The fine flashlight's flame fills
The cold dark room of lies;
Replacing them with truth,
As found by seeking eyes.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Savita Tyagi 06 December 2020

Flames of faith fall upon human mind that is willing to receive. Blessed are those hearts who spread the flame to remove the spell of the darkness.

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Aqua Flower 04 January 2020

Love the title to this poem. God's love is a flashlight of flame opening our eyes to truth. Letting the light shine in. I very much enjoyed reading this.

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 November 2019

'Night is about to fall, The shadows do the same; Make the perfect faith glow, Turn on the flashlight's flame.' - Beautiful stanza for the closure of the poem. A well-written quatrain.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 November 2019

Let there be light! I very much enjoyed reading your beautiful poem, Bernard. :)

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Anjandev Roy 08 October 2019

Receive God's loving care........significant piece.anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 September 2019

Allow the heart to feel/The warmth of Father's flare/Trust in the clear message/Receive God's loving care...lofty expression! A great poem my friend, I find a lot of pleasure reading this wonderful work again and again!

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Julia Luber 25 July 2019

Fun and imaginative poem about a flashlight.Really captures that sense of 'power' one might feel when using a flashlight just for fun and not for emergency measures which they are so often for. Nice poem about a basic daily activity and an action. Explaining the enigmatic power of daily acts! Great!

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Jane Campion 17 June 2019

In the flashlights flame we see the enemy.

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Valsa George 10 May 2019

Only light can defeat darkness! God's light can not only neutralize the darkness of Satan, but also illumine the surroundings! Let light have the final victory! A beautiful poem coming from an enlightened heart! A sure 10

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Thanks, dear Ma’am Valsa for the precise and faith-filled feedback🙏❤️😍👌

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2019

A wonderful poem! Brilliantly penned! My pleasure revisiting it!

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Jennifer Birchall 15 January 2019

Sometimes we need a little more light to guide us along the right path. Another brilliant poem Bernard.

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Cheryl Tutaan 04 January 2019

The bright flashlight's flame fights The deceit of devil; Amazing poetic lines, dear Ber...................

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Cheryl Tutaan 03 January 2019

The fine flashlight's flame fills The cold dark room of lies; Replacing them with truth, As found by seeking eyes. A fantastic first stanza of the whole poem, dear Bernie....................

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Cheryl Tutaan 01 January 2019

Allow the heart to feel The warmth of Father's flare; Trust in the clear message, Receive God's loving care. This is powerful and inspiring, dear Bernard.......................

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Cheryl Tutaan 30 December 2018

Another remarkable quatrain poem, Bernard. I love it❤️❤️❤️

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Cheryl Tutaan 27 December 2018

Bernard, a well crafted brilliant poem.......... job well done.............

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Savita Tyagi 04 December 2018

Beautiful poem Bernard. Let light of love and faith shine upon us all.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2018

Night is about to fall, The shadows do the same; Make the perfect faith glow, Turn on the flashlight's flame. A beautiful poem on spirituality. When you happen to read a great poem from among many, the feeling is akin to getting a jewel from a mine. A great read that deserves more than 10. Thank you Bernard

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 November 2018

Thanks, Aniruddha for the heartwarming comment................

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Wieslaw Musialowski 20 July 2018

Beauty in simplicity! 10+++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 September 2018

Thank you, Wieslaw for such wonderful feedback................

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Robert Murray Smith 29 May 2018

An imaginative write with great imagery. Well penned Bernard.++10

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Much thanks, Robert for the fascinating feedback🙏🙏🙏

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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