Friday, June 17, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

Oh how I want you, to be the one with me again.
You're like a little piece of heaven.
I just can't loose the grip of you, can't detach the fact
There are so many other, fish in the sea,
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Khloe Chace
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Rick Adriolo 08 July 2013

Normally I'm not into long poems because thay can't keep my attention.. But I was reading this and it was over before I knew it.. and thats really something! Very interesting and lovely poem.. could really sense that you put your heart in this one!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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