Thursday, December 4, 2008

Flash Drive (C) 12-4-08 Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life was about to plunge or about to take a deadly dive
Me livin was over only until you began to arrive
I formally felt there was no reason for me to be alive
But now I strive to stay afloat now that I have my Flash Drive
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Zahir Kijani
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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 December 2008

Fine flow and rhyme/rhythm well written 10+

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

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