Tuesday, April 21, 2009

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It flashes before your eyes
A moment in time when it
captures a smile or a memory,
that can be kept forever.
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Megan Collins
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Aylissa Ramirez 01 May 2009

i really like this one!

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Debra Kemper 21 April 2009

Interesting for a prose poem. It might be more effective in regular poetic form. A prose poem needs more, more more more more description. But, this is a cool poem. Just put it in stanzas. :)

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