Flamingo (Long Poem On Migrated Birds..) Comments

On an affirmative note Who says- Birds are signs of peace? Symbolic of Love or Token of tranquility! …when’st they are caught to let off, To show a sign, that they possess peace. Why not I ask a Shark or a lion? Apparent from the ocean or from the woods… Acquire this fame of freedom! Whozzat? Who says? A bird sings… Transcends a musical verse, Listen…it might be a cry for its lost lover- Lost in the trackless sky, A note of fear; Despair or o’er It’s destination, Might be for; its eggs or chicks stolen... I do not beg thine pardon…Mr positive For, I try to view beyond invisible truth. Dear Sir, This poem is one such verse whcih i ve not yet submitted in any of the web portals... This is exclusively for you..Sir, , , , in one line all that I would like to say is, this showcases my negative capability in contrast with positivity with its realistic touch. Im awaiting for your feedback. Regards Rao

Dear Sir, Ive read all your poems in the poem hunter, i love the optimisim you transcend through your verses, constantly delves amidst life lviing adn death and it differs from poem to poems... I appreciate the translator for, its not a easy job to pitch in the voice as the film dubbing artists do...great job- i believe satya- right. Regards Rao Sir..I wish to read it in telugu alone so as to feel the orginality.