Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Flames Of The Fire Comments

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The flame flow as you walk away and go
I feel the heat your anger released
I thought you had it under control
The flame the fire within you
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keturah bailey
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Mike Hayes 30 May 2008

this one isnt as strong as the rest of your poems

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sumit during day love at nite let hearts burn to a ashy emberr fadeing away.

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Tyease Collins 30 May 2008

Nice I really like it **Tyease**

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Christopher Leone 30 May 2008

good one...i like it

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