Friday, December 12, 2008

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Rating: 3.3

It is yet deep night of dream
flames of fire by the candles
livid darkness snaffles pale
scruples never hold it back
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Dr subhendu kar
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Ankita Sharma 15 March 2010

I almost think there is something about your poems, maybe but sure there is something puzzling... gives a slightly strange feeling, does it?

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Roy Martinez 16 October 2009

beautiful poem.I like it 10

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Tom Steiglitz 15 October 2009

excellent poem, i liked it very much 10

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Macey Calleigh 14 October 2009

A beautiful and wonderful poem........10

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Obinna Eruchie 27 September 2009

A beautiful and wonderful piece.

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warner treuter 12 September 2009

Pretty words. I think I'm too old to remember the feelings in your phraseology.

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eyes look limpid by the dew shadow of love tip toes into room ... it is simply outstanding and stands the taste of time... i loved it and each word made me feel happy.. a dream making me happy all the time....10 read mine'all drams not come true', , , individual and yes to to

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Kushal Vaishnani 11 June 2009

Sir.. it was sheer pleasure reading your poem. analogy and diction of the poem is simply outstanding....10 ++++ Regards Kushal

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Debra Joseph 08 June 2009

Hey Doc, you sure do write very well.

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 13 January 2009

lovely poem.i liked it very much10

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Vaibhav Pandey 10 January 2009

excellent poem sir 10

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C. P. Sharma 25 December 2008

Romance draped in Nature moves around your poem. Superb in imagery and majestic in gait. CP

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Stacey Watts 21 December 2008

Beautifully written. A very well written piece.

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Alison Cassidy 21 December 2008

Your poem is bathed in candle-light. It's flickering color floods the page and inspires the reader. A romantic, sensuous poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ana Dasilva 18 December 2008

Nicely written...thanks for sharing it..

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Lynda Robson 17 December 2008

Lovely flow to this piece, and I too like the association of colour and feelings, 10 Lynda xx

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Linda Moore 15 December 2008

Lovely Poem, Really like the way you associate color and emotion......10

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 December 2008

brillian work as always..This piece blown my mind into pieces....words amazingly/romantically/beautifully formed into poetry...its depth instilled into my heart and mind....nice to feel as love slowly comes in....intense love in a dream that ever reins can't hold it....but vagueness, fear and uncertainty engulped it....but find its way out after....10++++for this....

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 December 2008

Good work.........But these lines are amazing... shadow of love tip toes into room candle overawes by its gleams brazier rays of fall cascade

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