It is yet deep night of dream
flames of fire by the candles
livid darkness snaffles pale
scruples never hold it back
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From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
Pretty words. I think I'm too old to remember the feelings in your phraseology.
eyes look limpid by the dew shadow of love tip toes into room ... it is simply outstanding and stands the taste of time... i loved it and each word made me feel happy.. a dream making me happy all the time....10 read mine'all drams not come true', , , individual and yes to to
Sir.. it was sheer pleasure reading your poem. analogy and diction of the poem is simply outstanding....10 ++++ Regards Kushal
Romance draped in Nature moves around your poem. Superb in imagery and majestic in gait. CP
Your poem is bathed in candle-light. It's flickering color floods the page and inspires the reader. A romantic, sensuous poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Lovely flow to this piece, and I too like the association of colour and feelings, 10 Lynda xx
Lovely Poem, Really like the way you associate color and emotion......10
brillian work as always..This piece blown my mind into pieces....words amazingly/romantically/beautifully formed into poetry...its depth instilled into my heart and mind....nice to feel as love slowly comes in....intense love in a dream that ever reins can't hold it....but vagueness, fear and uncertainty engulped it....but find its way out after....10++++for this....
Good work.........But these lines are amazing... shadow of love tip toes into room candle overawes by its gleams brazier rays of fall cascade
I almost think there is something about your poems, maybe but sure there is something puzzling... gives a slightly strange feeling, does it?