! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Flames Of Dream! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

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Rating: 3.3


It is yet deep night of dream
flames of fire by the candles
livid darkness snaffles pale
scruples never hold it back

eyes look limpid by the dew
shadow of love tip toes into room
candle overawes by its gleams
brazier rays of fall cascade

grace of love blushes half muffled
scarlet red redounds in wine redolent
full moon redoubts of elysian blue
light follows path of deliverance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 27 September 2009

A beautiful and wonderful piece.

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warner treuter 12 September 2009

Pretty words. I think I'm too old to remember the feelings in your phraseology.

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eyes look limpid by the dew shadow of love tip toes into room ... it is simply outstanding and stands the taste of time... i loved it and each word made me feel happy.. a dream making me happy all the time....10 read mine'all drams not come true', , , individual and yes to to

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Kushal Vaishnani 11 June 2009

Sir.. it was sheer pleasure reading your poem. analogy and diction of the poem is simply outstanding....10 ++++ Regards Kushal

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Debra Joseph 08 June 2009

Hey Doc, you sure do write very well.

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Ankita Sharma 15 March 2010

I almost think there is something about your poems, maybe but sure there is something puzzling... gives a slightly strange feeling, does it?

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Roy Martinez 16 October 2009

beautiful poem.I like it 10

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Tom Steiglitz 15 October 2009

excellent poem, i liked it very much 10

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Macey Calleigh 14 October 2009

A beautiful and wonderful poem........10

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Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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