It is yet deep night of dream
flames of fire by the candles
livid darkness snaffles pale
scruples never hold it back
eyes look limpid by the dew
shadow of love tip toes into room
candle overawes by its gleams
brazier rays of fall cascade
grace of love blushes half muffled
scarlet red redounds in wine redolent
full moon redoubts of elysian blue
light follows path of deliverance
Pretty words. I think I'm too old to remember the feelings in your phraseology.
eyes look limpid by the dew shadow of love tip toes into room ... it is simply outstanding and stands the taste of time... i loved it and each word made me feel happy.. a dream making me happy all the time....10 read mine'all drams not come true', , , individual and yes to to
Sir.. it was sheer pleasure reading your poem. analogy and diction of the poem is simply outstanding....10 ++++ Regards Kushal
I almost think there is something about your poems, maybe but sure there is something puzzling... gives a slightly strange feeling, does it?
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful and wonderful piece.