Flames Of Desire Comments

a well written poem God has sent all with full protection with all resources of life. ce of poetry

Excellent writing dear poet.

When desires are extinguished and our self is merged in the eternal entity, our quest after love and peace is materialized! A beautiful poem of profound thought! ! Inspiring.....and delightful! !

Excellent Poem. There are two parts of your poem. First is the flames of desire and the second is the creations of nature. Flames of desire should be driven only by the Wisdom and only then the life will be like a morning star in the deepest darkness of the sky. You have said that when flames of desire will extinguish, you will find a quest of Love and peace. It is absolutely right. But you should not extinguish it because without this Wisdom cannot do more. Also your question has not been replied by the creatures because Nature has already given so many things and the time is to repay the same. Thanks.

'When flames of my all desire will extinguish the necklace of my thoughts will disperse my mind will find a new quest of Love and Peace' ~ What a kick-off [start]..let me read.... 'I will find out the answer from your endless ocean of wisdom' ~ Seekth Thyself Vedantic Concept 'Perhaps, these all are evils of my mind repenting on my past life' ~ Laws of Karma 'God has sent all with full protection/with all resources of life.' ~ But we're oblivious of it ~ Ye Forget Not Ye are Son Of Bliss Its wonderful experience I'd like sojourn in Vedantic Vally....Great poem...tenner must be in my poem list ~ Regards ~ niv ====== Thanks for comment on my poem Invite to read and comment on my poem [read as a protest] ‘Pean’ or Omni Pervading Mother … Thanks …..Sorry for belated comment

Like this, a really great poem.