Tuesday, March 6, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

'Children spread far afield,
They only had the two,
One's in London, the other Perth,
Not sure how I knew,
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Danny Draper
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Karen Deeks 12 March 2012

This is gorgeously worded Danny! ! If I get it right it's two parents who years ago were infused or fused together for life by adoration and declaration of love.Fleeting decades ringed a ragged crown... Exceptional in it's suggestion.Every single line holds a moment of thoughts and expressions to savour.. Brilliant piece, wonderful. Karen. Cheers :)

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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