Saturday, May 22, 2010

Flames Comments

Rating: 4.5

You dance around but have no beat
Giving off your burning heat
Swaying – lapping forth to and fro
Consuming all as you go
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Vaughn Bekker
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Angela Michel 25 May 2010

this is great, it is so very descriptive while still leaving much for the imagination.

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Ember Hathaway 25 May 2010

this is a great discribing of fire, nice rhyming! ! ! i enjoyed reading this

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Jerrell Frazier 23 May 2010

this poem is intelligent and very vivid

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