Flame On Waters Comments
What sense that she is present?
These are grasses that she has grieve at
There they’ve gone and smart they stood
Has Emerald drunk those flowing rivers that came from her swollen lids?
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the last line....leads me to see beyond time...a wonderful emotion, capture the immortality of tomorrow....a beautiful aura of the horizon of hope. a pedestal of conquering the wisdom of the spirit of today... leave no mark of wonder, its reality you stay my dear....I love the way you ink...the poem a 10 +++++
Very creative images you throw in this poem, Luningning, And good choice of words blended with some deep feelings so vivid in every line, I wish you the best in your education and in advancing your creative work. Aziz
you put so much feelings all through.. we can feel your poem breathing and sighing..nicely penned too..10.+
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Like being in a life raft upon the ocean