Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Flame Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a bright October night, I took a free ride
Into the depths of my imaginations,
Flickering in the murky chambers of my heart
I saw the brightness of a flame lit by affections
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Vinaya Joseph
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 February 2016

affections. love, hope, desire. wild imaginations....... thank you. you are very poetic dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 03 January 2015

A powerful piece of poetry, well articulated and beautifully penned in poetic diction. The expression is very lovely, I enjoyed the poem very much. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 15 November 2014

I saw the brightness of a flame lit by affections Sparkling and shy like a newly-wedded bride. A beautiful love poem portraying the kindling of love in a beautiful soul.I enjoyed it.Well done 10/10

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