Friday, April 11, 2014

Flame Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

My wings have spread like righteous fire
That melts away all grief.
Awakening the dormant will
That spent far too long asleep.
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Aaron Lynn
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Khairul Ahsan 12 April 2014

I am very excited to read this inspiring poem of yours, really wonderful! I've rated it 10/10. 'The sun's bright rays ignite me As I soar across the clearest skies. My heart burns with life's beauty And on confidence, my spirit glides.' - Confidence exudes from these lines. 'Never let your being wither, Force open your tired eyes. Escape the plague of sadness And inhale deep the flame of life.' - These are very inspirational lines.

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