Sunday, January 15, 2017

Flame In Your Eyes Comments

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J-anuary ninth breaks,
E-arly Monday morning;
A-fter the lonely twilight,
N-ew dawn is in the offing.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Carl Roussell 19 April 2018

The last stanza is exceptional writing: L-ight above the horizon I-s preparing to rise; T-ake time to fuel the fire A-nd the flame in your eyes.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 April 2018

Thanks a lot, dear Carl for the remarkable comment🙏🙏🙏

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Chinedu Dike 15 January 2017

Beautiful and insightful with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 January 2017

Thanks, Chinedu.... Your comment means so much to me.....

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
Bernard F. Asuncion
Bernard F. Asuncion
Subic, Philippines
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