Wednesday, October 3, 2012

Flame Comments

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What happens when there is a fire?
panic, hysteria
we want to put it out so desperately
to bring peace and calmness once again
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Kasia Fedyk
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Hans Vr 16 October 2012

Keep the flames burning high, Kasia. Enjoy the warmth and passion. Sometmes a foregn planet ecclipses the fire But soon it will be again in full sight The water of reason can kill the flame of passion Somehow it is a nice thing to keep them both in harmony This is a superb poem, Kasia

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Harriet James 04 October 2012

Yes this is true, but the flame burns well out of sight! !

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Chris Blazo 03 October 2012

Wow! So true. Just because it is hot and it hurts doesn't mean it's bad. I love this. Keep the truth!

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