Saturday, September 3, 2005

Flakes Comments

Rating: 3.5

Snowflakes fell, landing upon
the dilapidated body of man,
dressed not for the occasion
but for vanity and economic,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 September 2005

From a nipple fetish to this wonderful verse... You are a complex man, H....

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 September 2005

I enjoyed this Herbert. a nice write.

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Enemacles Redux 03 September 2005

Very good, Herbert! Alas, the lot of a snowflake... Perhaps, now, the flakes will start making the most of their fall to earth.. instead of worrying about their watery destiny on that wretched mans suit.

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