Thursday, August 28, 2008

Flags Or Rags? Comments

Rating: 4.7

Standing in abyss with two rags to my wrists
No scores settled with empty clenched fists
In this battle between 'the sense' and 'the rage'
The crescent and star and the colourful cage
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

spell binding! ! ! ! ! ..i cant say any more! ! ! !

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Mary Rich 21 May 2009

WOW! ! ! 10+....very well written heart felt....GREAT JOB.! ! ! ! sometimes hope is the only thing left....hang on to it for dear life.....your worth it....! ! !

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Ivor Hogg 19 December 2008

Always hope overcomes despair Torn between loyalties remain trie to yourself and all will be well

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Jen Shearer 11 December 2008

I like this poem alot, because it tells a very emotional and expressive storey

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Aijaz Asif 10 December 2008

a marvelloys write Omar, believe in what you believe is right and then you definitely will find the right path....im speachless with what youe have wrote and i'll love to put it in my collection of rubies and gold...thanks 10++++++++ and A+++ rgds asif

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Thufail Ahmed 06 December 2008

Omar- A splendid piece indeed! It carries along the reader, no matter what their roots. Hope to see this one in top 500.

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Ridge Cahill 29 November 2008

Omar - I am speechless. A wonderful poem that fills me with many, many emotions. The words for how I feel upon this read escapes me, but rest assured, 'tis brillant in every way.

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Very well written. I ike the feel of expression in each line it is well expressed!

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

wow......that was really deep..............well penned....will be bak for more

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Maria Haugen 10 September 2008

Great! I loved it! You're really talented, keep up the great work!

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Tissa Calvert 09 September 2008

I loved this poem 'flags or Rags' especially the part 'no scores settled with empty clenched fists. My favorite part.

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Vilma Xelin 08 September 2008

You left me speachless my dear Omar... your words are very stronger, I could feel your ira, your pain, your thoughts about how unfair are many things in this kind of life we live.... thanks for call my eye...

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Koyel Mitra 06 September 2008

Its an excellent poem.A full 10 for you.

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Ivor Hogg 05 September 2008

Your heart does not lie my friend There is but one God no matter what name men choose to call him by.Cleave to your hearts truths and be not led astray by evil men

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Razi Ud Din Razi 02 September 2008

its a beautifull poem dreams of a pakistani living abroad thanx razi

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 02 September 2008

fantastic! I like the last words, Or should I let it rekindle - for a chance of New Hope. keep writing, brother! Allahu Akbar! ! !

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Joseph Poewhit 01 September 2008

Poem has a lot of ideas of many dreams

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Masireh Sanyang 01 September 2008

the word you use perfectly describes the image you painting. beautiful poem

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Susan Jarvis 31 August 2008

Emotive and expressive - an accomplished, heartfelt piece of poetry with some potent imagery. S :)

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LOVEFOOL Aka 31 August 2008

Wonderful deep stirring work, A joy to read Nik

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Omar Ali Sabar

Omar Ali Sabar

Bellshill, Scotland
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