Standing in abyss with two rags to my wrists
No scores settled with empty clenched fists
In this battle between 'the sense' and 'the rage'
The crescent and star and the colourful cage
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WOW! ! ! 10+....very well written heart felt....GREAT JOB.! ! ! ! sometimes hope is the only thing left....hang on to it for dear life.....your worth it....! ! !
Always hope overcomes despair Torn between loyalties remain trie to yourself and all will be well
I like this poem alot, because it tells a very emotional and expressive storey
a marvelloys write Omar, believe in what you believe is right and then you definitely will find the right path....im speachless with what youe have wrote and i'll love to put it in my collection of rubies and gold...thanks 10++++++++ and A+++ rgds asif
Omar- A splendid piece indeed! It carries along the reader, no matter what their roots. Hope to see this one in top 500.
Omar - I am speechless. A wonderful poem that fills me with many, many emotions. The words for how I feel upon this read escapes me, but rest assured, 'tis brillant in every way.
Very well written. I ike the feel of expression in each line it is well expressed!
wow......that was really deep..............well penned....will be bak for more
Great! I loved it! You're really talented, keep up the great work!
I loved this poem 'flags or Rags' especially the part 'no scores settled with empty clenched fists. My favorite part.
You left me speachless my dear Omar... your words are very stronger, I could feel your ira, your pain, your thoughts about how unfair are many things in this kind of life we live.... thanks for call my eye...
Your heart does not lie my friend There is but one God no matter what name men choose to call him by.Cleave to your hearts truths and be not led astray by evil men
its a beautifull poem dreams of a pakistani living abroad thanx razi
fantastic! I like the last words, Or should I let it rekindle - for a chance of New Hope. keep writing, brother! Allahu Akbar! ! !
the word you use perfectly describes the image you painting. beautiful poem
Emotive and expressive - an accomplished, heartfelt piece of poetry with some potent imagery. S :)
spell binding! ! ! ! ! ..i cant say any more! ! ! !