Friday, March 2, 2012

Fixing My Heart Comments

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i was just wondering
if you could hear my heartbreak i my voice
if you could see it in my eyes
feel it in my soul
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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 04 March 2012

great poem about love, very emotional with a good rhythm of words and, of course, meaning

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 02 March 2012

if love and care are beyond repair...just let go rather than abject yourself to miseries. love is not always a bed of roses...but if there is still a little love left just try hanging on...a very good poem...well written...

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