Monday, October 13, 2008

..................Fixing A 12th Hand Car Comments

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Being kept penniless was way too much!
Gonna fix my ex's car...
Hell, he couldn't do it!
Couldn't find rusted parts...
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Chuck Audette 10 November 2008

Loved the title and imagery was a bit wacky Dr. Suessian. I assume it was you doing the gum pushing there at the end? Watch out it doesn't blow it out the tailpipe. -chuck

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Joseph Daly 14 October 2008

A lot of good sound in this Elysabeth. The narrative is great, but it is what you have done, in bringing togeytjer the word sounds that make this a real pleasure to engage with.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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