Friday, March 16, 2012

Fixation Comments

Rating: 3.7

i close my eyes
and see images
not as clear when
you are here
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Eloida Capuno
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Danny Draper 28 March 2012

This seems to be a set of mixed emotions. In the first verse it appears that longing and sadness abound and then in the second verse it ends in nighmare. It must definitely be a love hate relationship. Good form and style to the verse.

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