Wednesday, April 15, 2009
Fix Me Comments
Rating: ★4.8
I'm so hurt
My heart is broken
My soul damaged
Please come and fix me
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Daryl Young
15 April 2009
The passion and the almost screaming. The emptyness of it all. So very cool, beautiful flow. Good job, please feel free to read and comment on my works as well. thank you Rabbit
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7/27/2025 6:21:01 AM # 1.0.0
Your writing portrays real hurt feelings.. And It's affects your reader well! You must read my poem 'Those Eyes' and 'Sinking In Sadness' cause it kinda similar. Ill give it ten.