Monday, February 6, 2012

Five Things In Life.... Comments

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Theres Five things in life you cant recover no matter how hard you try,
A stone....after it's thrown,
The occassion...after its missed,
The time....after it's gone,
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Emma Jane Rae
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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2013

It's a beautiful poem. These are words of wisdom. A capitalized 'D' as the first letter of the last line, and 'Do not' instead of 'dont' would make it look better, I guess.

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Rick Adriolo 06 February 2012

That's soooo true and wise.. Love your poem!

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