Sunday, June 28, 2015

Five Steps You Die Comments

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Today as I sit
Under the locust tree
I recall vividly
My early morning walk
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Raymond Farrell
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Mj Lemon 28 June 2015

And so the pavement becomes the untamed field, the unmarked forest for the snake. A magnificent poem. I really enjoy your work.

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Raymond Farrell 28 June 2015

I think that is how it is going to be. Kelly's idea of the boots is okay but it is way too hot for that right now. Thanks for taking time to read the poem.

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Kelly Kurt 28 June 2015

Great stuff, Ray. I look forward to more pieces featuring your time in China. Maybe get some thick, high-top boots. : -)

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Raymond Farrell 28 June 2015

Thanks for reading the poem and the boots sound like a good idea.

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Perth, Ontario
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