Wednesday, July 5, 2006

Five More Minutes Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Time to get up! ' he says,
'Five more minutes' say I,
Groaning,
Eyes tired from the late night before,
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Aisha Sherazi
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Nalini Hebbar 05 July 2006

thats a very sweet poem and a very sweet way to deal with a child...you introduce him to a world of imagination...no better gift can a mother give to her child...an opening of the mind...great flow and character this poem exhibits...loved it...nalini

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Brian Dorn 05 July 2006

Aisha, an interesting and effective stalling tactic... and an even better poem. Well done! ! Brian

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Aisha Sherazi

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