Five Liners No.9. Altered Perception Comments

This poem deserves full 10 and I have rated for this.

Childish innocence has great values in life. In sadness you cry and in joy you smile. But there is no need to remain in sadness as a bright future invites with God's bless to lead and shine. This poem is emotional and excellent poem. This is very beautifully penned and shared.

“Laugh, and the world laughs with you…Cry, and you cry alone.” You are in a better position, all times the world is with you and you are never alone. As a child your approach was childish, as a young lady it was sentimental, now as a grown up grandmother, I am sure, when your grandchildren laugh you also laugh and when your grandchildren cry you also cry.

A Beautiful poem. Very true said, always opposite happens..I Can see Kavya singing a song, a true one for the situation. Say 1,2,3 start laughing or crying as told by Dinesh Sir. Very true said, world will follow. Good observation and of course beautiful is your presentation.

Like the perception of late......God proposes man disposes.............Valsa......everything in deference to the demands of time and at one's sweet wills............very well observed

dats true: -) reminded me of this old Hindi song tum jo hasoge toh duniya hasegi ro-oage tum toh na royegi duniya

Thanks Dinesh for this interesting comment, flavoured with true humour! Pradip, your comment has lifted my spirits too.....!

It lifts my spirit Valsa when I read your fragrant five liners.

You are perhaps hearing an echo of it. Perhaps the rest of the world might not have seen your time table for crying and laughing. Let us say 1,2 and 3 and then cry or laugh. Then the world will follow suit.

the whole world laughs When I am sad and cries when I am glad! - - True words mam: (

World waits for one to be on the other side.