Friday, January 24, 2014

Five Liners.No.5. A Slice Of Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

She fixed the canvas on the easel
Her imagination bled into colors deep
Her brush moved along the surface
With a flurry of strokes, images came alive
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2018

Her brush moved along the surface With a flurry of strokes, images came alive A slice of Nature animated with man and beasts! .....touching expression with nice collocation. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Akhtar Jawad 16 April 2018

A slice of Nature animated with man and beasts! An unique thought nicely penned.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 March 2014

How beautifully you have goaded our imagination to 'capture a slice of nature' with your five liner, on 'her easel and canvas'! And wow, what a fantastic impression you gave through these words: 'Her imagination bled into colors deep' With just five lines, a complete picture came alive, just as you said: 'With a flurry of strokes, images came alive'. Marvelous! 10/10.

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Amitava Sur 05 February 2014

A lovely detailing of nature through this imagery as a painter... so nice.

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Muhammad Ali 03 February 2014

A five liner, not less than what she paint. And here the suspense is also added.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 January 2014

Beautifully depicted Nature on canvas so lively and vibrant...............Valsa.............

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Kee Thampi 27 January 2014

beauty in lines Her brush moved along the surface With a flurry of strokes, images came alive

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Md Asadullah 26 January 2014

I can see a slice of Nature in this five liner :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 January 2014

Capture a slice of nature on canvas with a stroke of brush. Beautiful five liner. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 January 2014

Wow... beautiful moments captured in canvas. I just wondered if really the images came out alive from canvas....Then I will paint something lovely and inspiring ones only...Loved it...

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 January 2014

the metamorphosis poignantly captured!

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Dinesan Madathil 24 January 2014

When she gets many such slices readied on that canvas, the bounteous nature will itself be visible to the world. A fine five liner poem from you, Madam Valsa.

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