Five Liners No.2 (Molestation) Comments

Stunning poem Valsa. Great images. I really love..... The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet.

A beautiful imagination...................10

Great imagery with fantastic lines....Valsa......so beautifully crafted.......10/10

Poor Sky! i especially enjoyed the line: The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet. remember me telling you about coincidences in my life the other day? well, TODAY i read a short story to my wife (from 1921 i believe) entitled Only Child, in which thunder and lightning was prominently mentioned. [ i haven't heard/seen thunder/lighting in a VERY LONG time.] i call that (this poem tied to the short story on; the SAME DAY) another spooky coincidence. would anybody agree? thanks for sharing. bri ;)

An excellent comparison! ! ! ! ! top markss

What an imagination! You are a great poet!

ohfoooo amazing imagination...am completely blown off with these 5 lines.......so short yet so meaningful.....g8 write

A beautiful and tempestuous poem, makes one inclined to storm out of there.

A wonderful comparison of the sky to a girl where lighting ruptures her and thunder stamps her when she sheds tears of rain! GREAT IMAGERY!

Feel so much sadness in these words. Interesting write.

It's a great symbolic poem. The elements of Nature symbolize the human being.

A wonderful poem again. Brevity of expression, but fully meaningful.Thanks.

A celestial wedding is to be there ahead perhaps. Let us hope the molestation is just forgiven and forgotten. Powerful lines, Madam Valsa..