Sunday, May 25, 2014

Five Liners No.11. Right Words Comments

Rating: 4.0

Words of concern, genuine and apt,
Like rays from heaven, radiant and bright
Penetrate the gloom of many a heart
Help them brave the weary day
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 December 2018

Help them brave the weary day And leave them gladdened all the way.......touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

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Amitava Sur 24 June 2014

definitely the the combination of right words does bear a immense impact which itself is wisdom.... very nice

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Kanav Justa 15 June 2014

, , , knowing that somebody cares can ease us from the severest of the sorrows, , , a beautiful write, , , lot of positivity in this poem, , ,

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Shahzia Batool 01 June 2014

i have experienced it on my pulse...so relatable!

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Akhtar Jawad 28 May 2014

Symbols formed letters and letters formed words, Words are essential for communication, But when two lovers sit face by face, The silent language of love is supreme. A nice five lines.

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Every day brings new rays of hope and we look forward to another day. Life becomes interesting.

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Dinesan Madathil 26 May 2014

Meaningful and rightly aired words mean a lot, they are often life sustaining in our circles and we are committed to honour them. A fine five liner with a message to every social being. Enjoyed reading it madam.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 May 2014

Good morning poet Valse. Thank you for your recent review. I so enjoyed this inspiring poem of wisdom, well done. Loyd

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Paul Sebastian 25 May 2014

Words, but words that give life and hope to the weary heart! Beautiful write!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 May 2014

yes indeed, words move worlds.

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Rightly said.........Valsa.............right words are like words of God so inspiring that penetrate the gloom and help brave the weary day away.........great write as always.............

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Suman Kumar Das 25 May 2014

Words build relation. Words break relation. Words bring blessings Words give curse... ................Words are the most powerful weapon in this world.......Wonderful write. Madam!

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