Five Liners No.10. Nostalgia Comments

Mirage of the desert eludes the riders of the caravan yet they finally get oasis in the wilderness. A beautiful poem having nice theme. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10

The traveler of desert being frustrated by mirages, ultimately finds an oasis where there is greenery, water and the dates and green bushes for his camel too.........................10

ok, as long as it isn't a mirage of dessert. that would be TOO cruel! thanks for sharing, valsa. bri :)

Behind all these elicits hopes or displays nostalgia..........Valsa........very well said.................

The mirage is what keeps the caravan moving in the dreary desert of life. Let the sands be soft beneath your feet Let the sun be less harsh on your brow Time traveler of several births that you are Let you find deliverance of your honest soul..........

A beautiful poem Valsa... Very true said only the lone traveller knows...... Beautiful lines... excites the loner like an oasis in wilderness...loved it. Short and deep.

the metaphor of the caravan and the oasis is astounding!

Nostalgic experiences of the kind are a bliss as the shortest pains are the greatest pleasures. Even when we touch an ice cube or a live electric wire we treasure it for its nostalgic flavour. Every nostalgia of the kind still better and leaves one lost in the cradle of time. A good five liner Madam.

oasis in wilderness, still hope is there.

Small but beautiful 10/10, Mam if you've time kindly read my poem too named Nostalgia, it is one of my favourites, it was my contest poem for PH poetry contest till at last moment I changed it with Reflection because it was too small :)

Melancholic ache for times gone nicely viewed in the poem.

love to read this poem melancholic ache for times