Thursday, May 6, 2021

Five Liners 21-25 Comments

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21 Magical Splotch
A golden splotch in my first perception
As if another sun through two coconut fronds
Chequered golden befriending in sunshine
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Indira Renganathan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 June 2021

I write here, since your message is not working, dear Poetess.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 June 2021

CONT. so now the palys are over, only for a fortnight, dear Poetess. That is actual occurrence/ Thank yiou for your precious visit and appreciatred comment. In gratitude, Sylvia FC

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 June 2021

Dear Poetess, your response on my poem Happy days at your favourite park before this prevailing pandemic. This is ioccurring NOW, dear Poetess, their Final was Last Sunday,

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M Asim Nehal 07 May 2021

Reading your poem is a treat to soul...5****************

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M Asim Nehal 07 May 2021

All are wisely written. But I liked the one about Education: A lifelong satisfaction with us that lives

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All these five liners that you pen are pearls of wisdom. I loved the reading verse that fills us with knowledge and wisdom. Top stars dear Ma'm.

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Dear Indira Ma'm, Trust all is fine at your end. Do stay safe, well and happy.. So good to see your poem.

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