Five Liners.17. Dance Comments

I got lost with the wonderful rhythm of this delightful five liners dear madam! Appreciated this short magnificent composition....10/10

Beautifully crafted succinct write. Loved all excellent lines. The imagery is superb.10+++

Yes, a dance is poetry of a living body, everyone is lost in this poetry in motion. A lovely poem to comment after a long excercise to find a poem of Valsa George that is not read by me. I don't know who loves poetry more, a poet or a reader.

With rising rhythm, she gyrated in frenzied joy Her body flowed like a droplet on a slimy lotus leaf As she revolved like a top, I got lost in the poetry in motion! .... loved these lines. Beautiful poem on Dance having amusing depiction with nice diction. Thanks.

Beautiful poem dancing in rhythm. Words are dancing along with the steps of dancer. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

We all enjoy a dance- its rhythm, its motion etc. We all enjoy your poem too!

Your poem dances with its lines dynamically changing in length, yet keeping a natural flow. Thank you.

I was instantly lost in the motion of your poem Valsa. Your words conjured up a graceful beauty...Valsa, who dances across the page with graceful inky footsteps that seem to flow effortlessly.

Indeed wonderful! This poem dances. (10)

This poem. Electrifyingly, brilliant, Dance defined as...Poetry in Motion.... Sometimes one verse is enough, To work as a magic potion. Wonderful poem, Valsa!

Wonderful crafting of a touching incident. Full marks.