Five Liners.16. You.... Comments

Brief but beautiful poem on love. Wonderful imaginary. Thanks for sharing.

Now that's love! Exquisite succinct poetry!

Lovely lines. When heart is ready to receive even the softest footsteps are recognized. Just read your another one of your lovely poem still born. Don't know why I can't post the comment but thank God site is working fine here.

What else do one require, its explained in just five fantastic lines. A Beautiful way one make an entry to ones heart. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

A sense of closeness and confidentiality that need to be present in a conjugal relation has been conveyed sublimely in this poem.

A magical serenity injected into five short lines of lovely thought. Thank you.

A very beautiful five liner. Well worded.

An attractive poem with deep envision about thought. Many thanks madam, may God bless you and your family.

Beautiful, and a very accurate description of how thoughts of someone can unexpectedly and stealthily enter your mind.

Where were you Velsa to be so Romantic? Thanks for sharing.

And the thoughts carried her in a dreamy land, With closed eye lids and a hand in hand, She found herself in a palace so grand, A place where love.s personified, As angels and fairies so dignified, Pains and sorrows all rectified, And when saturated with heavenly charms, She found herself in her husband's arms!