Five Liners.1 (The Finishing Touch) Comments

Blew into it the breath of life, ......this line says much through your pen about the philosophical base of the poem. Beautifully put. Thanks for sharing this Five Liners - 1.

What you've put so well in a five-liner as you say is eminently true. Any work of art, portrait be it or poetry, what makes a difference is infusion of life in it.

You have painted a masterpiece on the canvas of your beautiful poem. Beautifully crafted. Great brevity.10+++

A beautiful poem having haunting expression. Though it is in brief yet it explores vast meaning relating to philosophy. Thanks for sharing.

There it stays! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Amazing write in few words wonderfully......Valsa.......a masterpiece indeed

Stunning! With the stroke of a pen, a dab of ink, and a bit of inspiration, you've created something beautiful, and I love it. Good job.

brevity makes it a masterpiece. Enjoyed.

Marvellous! 'tis a masterpiece! ! ! ! ! !

Short, precise and full of detail. A fine work of art, your timeless masterpiece.

A masterpiece like this write - brilliant.

An artist's words are revealed thru this superb poem.Soon your masterpiece will be before the world.

after the finishing touch, the painters normally do not touch the paintings again, even if they try to touch also, it looks very odd, but the poets have the option of editing. very touching poem!