Five Liner. Sleep Comments

As the glowworms in the stygian night Throw flickers of light like scattered gems When little birdies cuddle under their mother’s warmth I sense the indulgent grip of Sleep Who takes me to his gilded chamber of dreams! .....so wonderful expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

gilded chamber of dreams.....lovely. anjandev roy.

Scattered gems motivate mind with beauty of glimmering force. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.

The second line of this poem is indeed a real gem, imprinting vivid imaginations!

I sense the indulgent grip of Sleep Who takes me to his gilded chamber of dreams! A nice five liner.................

Very intriguing and deep like a Stygian night.. Rated 10

You are gifted to write of anything even glowworms. Thank You

A Gem of an image for sure!

You have brought elements of sweet sleep, From glowworms and stygian night's leap. Cuddle of mother to her little birdies, Warmth of mother that mutes worries. Indulgent grip of Sleep brings a dream, ..........10 'Sleep' is your poem full of cream. I have no words to offer you thank, May God bless you for poesy bank.

After reading the poem I seem to understand where dreams come from. Beautiful choice of words to describe Sleep, our friend. Thank you.

Tell me of what ethereal wine you are drunk That so much poesy brims in your head Like glowing glowworms without a cease Casting imagery day and night (10)