Five Liner- King Fisher Comments

Beautifully penned.- - - -+10

a hunting so nicely described in beautiful words and lines.

Wow so well written.......Poem and snap shot is complement to each other.

A brilliant picture of the bird swooping down and picking up the fish flashes through our mind on reading the poem and there is no need for any pictorial depiction.

You captured the instant more beautifully than the picture.

The poem and the picture complimented so well...beautiful..thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

There are a lot of people writing five-liners I wish we could get them to quit labelling them limericks. I enjoyed this one, Valsa

the caption caught my attention - wonderful poem with beautiful picturesque

An image flashed through my mind as I read each perfectly placed word

Sometimes few words works more than a full book.....nice one.....thank you for sharing :)

If we have that amount of peace in mind and the patience to admire little little things in nature, what a remedy they would be to ailing minds and hearts. Your sweet five liner clearly demonstrates how to do that. Mind you, only poets and artists can do this. Thank you for sharing.x

A powerful five-liner that weighs more than a long poem. Descriptive writing is definitely your forte. Another marvel of a poem.