In the evening sky wade the truant clouds
With the sweep of wind, I see them
Forming into configurations of varied shape and size!
Giants, mountains and raw bundles of fluffy wool
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Clouds form various beautiful patterns, a lovely description of evening sky.......
Short and sweet - yet a memorable event. Well, all things sweet have to be short!
We all have often wondered at the concinnity of the cloud formation. THIS FIVE LINER IS EXCELLANT.
Clouds weave patterns on mountain tops. Beautiful scene described in the five line.
I see them with the sweep of wind and mind fills the essence of evening scene with shiny nature of clouds. Beautiful imagery makes this amazing.
Great imagery with wonderful lines on fleecy clouds that float in azure and above in ethereal blue to be woven into many a dream......Valsa.....very beautifully composed.......10
good one..hw true..yes clouds take various shapes and forms for us to admire them more and think deep
lovely expression of clouds about their formations in so many ways in the distant sky what we all love to see.... very nice
Very nicely composed about clouds and its various appearance in five lines. Deep feeling; fantastic expression. Many thanks dear madam, ..
Ravishing description of clouds and shapes. Poetically accurate. Being a cloud gazer myself, could not have enjoyed this quintet more. Fine work.
Very great description of how clouds appear to us here on earth. Love clouds also. Thank you, Valsa - very nice descriptive poem. RoseAnn
A poem as beautiful as the evening sky.